Evil’s Trap

“Wait!” Eric jumped between the supervillains, his hands stretched toward the one with the pistol. “Just—wait.”

At the top of the steps, Neutrino sneered at the costumed hero ‘Waveform’ between him and his target. “Don’t you ever get tired of being the only one who cares?”

“Of course not.” Dr. Volkow clapped Eric on the shoulder and stepped around him. “That’s what makes him a hero.”

On reflex, Eric grabbed Volkow’s arm to prevent him from advancing recklessly. While Eric’s superpowers made him practically invulnerable to injury, the particularly unique pistol that Neutrino brandished was capable of searing a fatal hole through him with nearly zero resistance; not to mention Dr. Volkow didn’t have any actual powers, nor did his villain costume include body armor. Also, the reactor’s auxiliary control room in which they were cornered offered no advantages whatsoever. It was one of those irksome moments where Eric wished for super speed. Or dumber opponents.

He nodded discretely to the cooperative supervillain. “Got a plan?”

Volkow straightened his parka. “I always have a plan.”

“A good plan?”

“I’ll let you know after it works.”

Facing his former partner in crime, Volkow smiled the smile he generally reserved for the authorities which, as those who knew anything about him at all could attest, would be followed by an unthinkable exit strategy that leaves his opposition befuddled and, more often than not, disoriented and/or incapacitated. No one liked that smile.

“You’re a difficult man to draw out, Volkow.” Perspiration glittered on Neutrino’s angry brow; he nodded to Eric. “Waveform, this trap wasn’t for you. You can go.”

Eric hesitated. He orchestrated all this to use me as bait? For Volkow? He nearly dismissed the notion as ludicrous until, after a thought, he realized with a mixture of reluctance and astonishment that it made perfect sense. It was true; over the past couple of years, whenever Eric found himself truly in over his head in the never-ending battle for justice, Volkow always appeared. Always.

Eric scoffed with numb contempt. I may seriously dislike Volkow but there’s no way I’m hanging him out to dry. “I’m not going anywhere.”

The gravity of the ensuing hush and twin stares from the other men told him they both expected him to comply.

You’re kidding me

He glanced incredulous from one villain to the other. “You’re joking! What kind of stupid plan is this?!”

Volkow clasped hands behind his back and arched dark brows, cheeky but queerly inarticulate.

“I’m not—I can’t.” Eric appealed to Volkow, “The implosion device–.”

“Can be disarmed and safely disposed of either by me in the event that I throttle our mutual adversary, or by our adversary in the event that he bests me because I’m the object of his loathing, not you and not your seaside of innocent people.” Volkow’s statement was qualified by a begrudging half-shrug and nod from Neutrino. “Besides, while I always appreciate your presence, even when your intention is to tear me asunder, I too recommend you at least wait outside. Or, better still, you could go home to prepare for your birthday dinner—but you won’t. You’re much too gallant to do such a thing when evil is still mucking about unsupervised.”

What about you? “Volkow–.”

The villain’s tone changed. “Trust me.”

It’s weird, but I do. Eric exhaled with annoyance but, despite ambivalence, he conceded; he issued Neutrino one last leer before turning to Volkow. “Make it quick and stay alive. My mum… she, uh… sort of might be expecting you to drop by after dinner for cake.” He paused to indicate Volkow’s signature supervillian parka. “Don’t wear that.”

[This is part 3 of a series of scenes. If you’re interested, check out part 1 and part 2. The 4th part will follow shortly. I recommend you read them in order (they aren’t too long). It’ll all make much more sense.]

3 thoughts on “Evil’s Trap

  1. riverfox237 says:

    Yesssssssssssssss part 3 at last! Man this one had me cracking up. XD I absolutely love scenarios where someone (generally the good-hearted hero) has to deal with utter consternation because someone or something else isn’t acting the way they are supposed to. Also it’s really touching to find an ‘evil’ character so dedicated to preserving the good guy just because the good guy represents all the good left in the world to him. TL;DR YES GOOD MORE PLEASE

    If you’re open to critique, there was just one sentence that felt rough to me: “Eric exhaled with annoyance however, despite ambivalence, he conceded; he issued Neutrino one last leer before turning to Volkow.” The first half of this one doesn’t flow very well and was a little hard to understand. Possible suggestion: “Eric exhaled with annoyance but, despite his ambivalence, at last conceded.” Dunno if that works perfectly either, just an idea to help articulate my point. Otherwise, the writing is solid as always, keep up the great work.

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    • Duri Rolvsson says:

      Finally, right? I hadn’t realized it’d been so long since the last scene (where did the time go??). Sorry ’bout that.

      You know, I’d stared at that exact sentence for days, flopping between “however” and “but.” DAYS. I’m gonna switch it back to “but” then. Yes critiques! Thank you!!

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